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You Can't Take The Sky From Me (Chapter 7)
Title: You can’t take the sky from me. (Chapter 7)
Author: DeadlyBruin
Series/Movie: Firefly/Serenity.
Disclaimer: All contents and characters herein relating to Firefly/Serenity belong to the FOX network, Joss Whedon and associated writers. Any original characters are my own creations and therefore belong to me and are not necessarily affiliated with Firefly/Serenity. You may not copy, edit or distribute this fanfiction as it stands without me express permission and consent. Thank you.
He wasn’t surprised that Jayne had come back drunk. He’d sent the man on a mission with coin and intention to have a good time, hoping that he’d come back with some useful information. What he hadn’t expected was for Jayne to have to be carried back to Serenity by this mystery man and their half-naked companion. She had disappeared not long after they’d got Jayne aboard the ship, saying that she needed to get back to the bar b
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You Can't Take The Sky From Me (Chapter 3) :icondeadlybruin:DeadlyBruin 7 14
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You Can't Take the Sky From Me (Chapter 2) :icondeadlybruin:DeadlyBruin 6 10
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Contnuum pt 2 by DeadlyBruin
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Continuum by DeadlyBruin
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Raen Drakaren by DeadlyBruin
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Following the Shepard by DeadlyBruin
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An end and a beginning!
Well, I have this minute just posted up the Epilogue to the Mass Effect fanfiction I was writing concluding Mass Effect One for Abigail Shepard.
It has been one hell of a ride, to quote a certain Canadian Major / Spectre.
I wanted to take the time though to thank everyone who has read the chapters, it seems only yesterday I was teasing out how to write Virmire and make it unique to me, and now here I am wrapping up the end to Mass Effect One in a most unexpected way!
It's not been easy, by any means, but it has been a lot of fun and I owe some very special thank yous to people.
First and foremost to :icondeadlybruin: my wonderful fiance, for putting up with my nagging, my constant temper tantrums and nit-picking and over analysing ever single action of a character - and foremost for bringing Hobbs in to the series. without your input and insistence he would not have grown to the character he is - and although I might have taken him on a different road than you intended, I think he is b
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Ilos Epilogue by Dinky-Mew
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Ilos Chapter Seven by Dinky-Mew
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Ilos Chapter Six by Dinky-Mew
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young Abigail Shepard by jagespages young Abigail Shepard :iconjagespages:jagespages 5 9 Young Hobbs ME by jagespages Young Hobbs ME :iconjagespages:jagespages 6 15 Dream Team by jagespages Dream Team :iconjagespages:jagespages 5 7 Swagger Vasa by jagespages Swagger Vasa :iconjagespages:jagespages 4 7
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Captain Mal by jagespages Captain Mal :iconjagespages:jagespages 7 14
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The Miss-adventures of Kaidan Alenko... :icondinky-mew:Dinky-Mew 8 20
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Ok, so since I've become a member I've dabbled in some pieces here and there. I started a Mass Effect Original storyline and whereas the ideas and storyline is still in my head, I've become a bit sidetracked and consumed with helping Dinky-Mew with her Mass Effect stuff, contributing pieces there so my Original ME stuff is on the backburner a bit.

Dinky said something to me about Firefly the other day, about it's potential renewal for a second season but without at least Nathan Fillion as Mal due to current contractual obligations. Well whether that comes to pass or not, it gave me the itch to get some Firefly stuff down. The fanfic would be a continuation after the events of Serenity.

Having said that, I have also been catching up on the latest Supernatural and have come up with what I think is quite a good story progression for what's going on with them in Season 8 and would like to explore that as well.

So, I've come up with a poll to hopefully get the opinion of the odd passerby who's read some of my stuff or has seen the contributions I've made towards Dinky-Mew's Virmire and Mass Effect Universe storylines. After a week or so I'll see where the poll stands and go from there! So, if you do happen to contribute then thank you very much! And if you'd like to leave a comment in support of your vote then here is the place to do it :)


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What can I say? I love to read and write. Among a variety of other things. My time is mostly occupied by work and being a Father to three rambunctious boys. However, a genuine love of mine is writing and I have been away from that for a time. Im hoping now to rediscover that spark and bring some things to life :)


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Chamenos Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Happy Birthday! :party: :cake: :D
Ezri-Krios Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Happy Birthday!! Hope you've had a great day with the family. :party: :-)
CHatterBOx010 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Happy birthday :party:
27FreeGal Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013
Will you continue with "You can't take the sky from me"? Please do so (soon!!)!! Want to read more!!!! You haven't updated it for quiet a while :( and I'm starting to worry if you'll continue it at all... Please, it's a great story!! :)
Ezri-Krios Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Featured. [link] :-)
jagespages Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, Allan, thanks for the three faves! :) :) :) And, know you've been busy, but could I ask about the Marty evaluation? Theresa doesn't know abt him/it yet. Need your feedback if you would be so kind...:heart:
DeadlyBruin Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013
Hey JJ, sorry it's taken me so long to reply to this, I dont know if Theresa's said anything but my Laptop died on me rather unceremoniously so I've not had much internet time! On top of that I fear I'm coming down with a bout of Man Flu, it's a real thing y'know :P

As for Marty, I wasn't so sure to begin with. I didnt know how I felt about the idea of Swagger only being as awesome as he is due to an unseen force guiding his hand but when I read more and realised that Marty in fact did only little unseen things here and there and that Swagger had free will to do as he pleased I was much more intrigued, and then by the whole situation in general.

I feel like Marty opens a lot of doors and adds in another dimension to an already rich and layered storyline, which took me from 'Why am I still waiting for the boom to drop?' to 'Daymn!' in a matter of Chapters :)

All in I like Marty and the things he brings to the table. The scene where he briefly took control(ish) for a bit of steamyness with Pixie in the shower was a great example I think of exploring the dangers of having such a powerful symbiote :)
jagespages Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much. You ropinions matter to us and I am so sorry to hear about the man Flu and laptop. It really helps us to know the symbiote thing works since it is such an important factor, so YAY! We are almost done wiht Book 3 editing and one more read-through to hopefully catch any auto-correct and type-os and then we will publish it. I am almost to 500 pages on Book 4. Feel better, my friend! :) :)
jagespages Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for faving Swagger. Is he how you thought?
DeadlyBruin Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013
Mostly. He has the same intense look, the same set jaw and that look, 'the look of eagles' about him. I really like it and it's cemented an image of him in my head whereas before my mind had a couple of pictures I couldn't choose from!! Big Love!! :D You really know how to do your characters justice in every sense of the word! :D
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